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Joshua Junior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 43phoenix,az,usa |
I love you You love me We've shared Our feelings For the last Thirteen months Both verbaly And phisicly Now the true test Who will do the best? Your going to SCU While I'll be at FSU This perfect evening has brought out the Imperfection of our relationship Here in this bed You want to take our conection One step further It would be great But.. What then? ------------------ "Poetry is an orphan of scilence. The words never quite equal the experiece behind them." *Charles Simic "The poet is the priest of the invisable." *Wallace Stevens* |
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Seeking77 Junior Member
since 1999-07-09
Posts 24Irvine california |
Very good poem and something to contemplate..what will happen next?? I think whoever this poem is about, she should read it...it's very good work! Thanks! |
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Joshua Junior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 43phoenix,az,usa |
its not about any one particular. remember "about me"? ------------------ "Poetry is an orphan of scilence. The words never quite equal the experiece behind them." *Charles Simic* "The poet is the priest of the invisable." *Wallace Stevens* "I don't write poetry for me or about my experiences, I rely on others for that. I write poetry for others." *Me* |
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