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orpheus
Junior Member

since 1999-07-10

Posts 30
Portugal

0 posted 1999-07-10 10:36 PM

Sometimes I'm cold
No smiles, no tears, no sound
Cold and alone in the dark in this corner
Darker than you
Darker in you

And you are smiling
And you are dancing
And you are throwing kisses like roses
And you are cutting cutting me deep

I am here, bleeding still

What you want is what you burn is what I feel
To feel is to lose
And I have felt you way too much

[This message has been edited by orpheus (edited 07-12-99).]

Joshua
Junior Member

since 1999-07-08

Posts 43
phoenix,az,usa

1 posted 1999-07-10 10:43 PM

That was deep!!!

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orpheus
Junior Member

since 1999-07-10

Posts 30
Portugal

2 posted 1999-07-11 12:05 PM

I'm glad I touched you, Joshua. Thank you for letting your soul open.

breatheyou
New Member

since 1999-07-11

Posts 2

3 posted 1999-07-11 03:27 AM

I was first attracted by your name. But soon I was attracted by the strength of your poem. Thank you for the depth

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