It's a poem I wrote when I got saved

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It's a poem I wrote when I got saved

HerLoss
New Member

since 1999-07-09

Posts 5
Westminster, CA, USA

0 posted 1999-07-09 09:50 PM

Deep down inside I was crying

"My life is fine without you", I was lying

But you were there to give me the love I did not earn

I denied you, but your fire of love still burned

Make the situation better, I tried and tried
After many failing times, I accepted you into my life

How quickly you came to me, oh dear God.

You filled your love both in my heart and my thoughts

Oh please let my know you more, dear Lord.

For as I know you, I love you more and more
Please hold me close and never leave

For you are true, Lord, and I was decieved.

Delilah
Junior Member

since 1999-07-08

Posts 36
The Wonderful America

1 posted 1999-07-10 12:08 PM

Extremely well written poem. I really enjoyed it!

Gedanken
Junior Member

since 1999-07-04

Posts 16
New york

2 posted 1999-07-11 12:53 PM

nicly worded and so true

Kelly
Member

since 1999-07-03

Posts 145

3 posted 1999-07-11 01:12 PM

Beautiful poem. Don't ever let what you have found slip away. God will always be there for you when you need him. I'm happy for you that you found him so young. Keep up the good work.

katrina
Junior Member

since 1999-06-20

Posts 41
White Bear Lake, Minnesota, U.S.A

4 posted 1999-07-12 12:45 PM

wonderful poem! I just got back from a christian music festival, and it is great for I feel closer to God. I am happy to hear so do you! Two things I heard there really touched me and I would like to share them with you and everyone:
"It is easy to say yres to God, It is hard to say no to the world."

"God does not call the qualified, but qualifies the called."

Great poem!

Robert
Junior Member

since 1999-07-09

Posts 20
sunrise,fl,usa

5 posted 1999-07-15 08:52 PM

this is a really great poem keep up the good work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Mokagrl14
Junior Member

since 1999-07-15

Posts 12
Cape Coral, Fl, USA

6 posted 1999-07-16 08:38 PM

Wonderful poem! It brought back the memory of when I was saved! Thankyou so much!

Krista :O)
PS~ Dont EVER loose your faith, cuz God will never loose his!

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