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Death's sorrow
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Death's sorrow |
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foxy New Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 3Falmouth, MA, U.S. |
I feel myself trembling as I hear him grow near, too overwhelmed by the tight grip of fear, I hear him getting closer, but I can't seem to run, I'm the last an fianl stop before his job is done. I will not go easy into the dying light, I won't let him take me into the blackened night. But as death's solemn gaze fell sadly to my face, My soul was gripped with sorrow upon his cold embrace. For the only thing death wanted was what I'd tried to flee, Poor death was doomed to roam the earth for all eternity. |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
Wow! I got chills reading this. You definitely have a talent, foxy, and I hope you continue to write and post here. WELCOME! Thanks for sharing this with us.  dp |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Had to move this up. You might consider posting this in Open forum. ------------------ I am not responsible for how you choose to interpret what I say. DreamEvil© |
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heaven_0401 Junior Member
since 1999-07-12
Posts 19Australia |
Fozy you have a obvious and marvellous talent, and i commend you on this brave piece of writing I hope you continue to write poems on here Love Heaven |
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