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tiffany
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since 1999-07-06
Posts 8
falmouth, massachusetts,united states

0 posted 1999-07-08 10:40 AM


I LOOK INTO THE MIRROR AND WHAT DO I SEE,
MY REFLECTION, I SEE ME.
MAYBE NOT HOW I'D LIKE I TO BE,
BUT THERE IS NO WAY I CAN CHANGE WHAT I SEE.
I'M NOT GOING FORLOOKS, CLOTHES OR MAKE-UP EVEN,
IT'S DEEPER THAT THAT, ALL I SEE IS A DEMON.
I SEE MY PERSONALITY,MY ATTITUDE AND SOUL,
BUT FOR SOME ODD REASON I NEVER FEEL WHOLE.
WHAT'S MISSING FROM MY LIFE,LOVE AFFECTION, OR SOMEONE,
I'VE FOUND PLENTY OF PEOPLE BUT NEVER THE RIGHT ONE.
SO IN JANUARY WHEN MY SON IS BORN,
MAYBE I'LL FIND THAT RELFECTION THAT I'VE NEEDED FOR SO LONG.

© Copyright 1999 tiffany - All Rights Reserved
lowradiation32
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 6
Cape Cod Mass
1 posted 1999-07-08 10:46 AM


what a sweet/powerful poem
showing depth is not an easy thing to do/

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