Teen Poetry #1 |
The Unicorn Princess |
Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Beyond the rolling clouds of white, I see a beautiful land, lustrous and bright. Upon the soft wings of the wind I fly, Longing to know the land below, wondering if I should dare to try. I gaze at grand waterfalls, oceans, and eyes in the mist, And down I descend, unable to resist. I leave the coldness of Earth behind, To know the purest of souls, the ones like mine. A unicorn greets me, eyes shining like stars, And she instantly knows I have come from afar. Her melodious voice whispers in the wind, And she offers me her love, for we are of kin. I follow the gentle being into the night, Her horn, ribboned in gold, is my guiding light. A shower of fairies show us the way, They guide us to the forest, for there I shall forever stay. I have never left this beautiful place, Never again laid eyes on another human face, For I am the chosen one of this land of eternity, I am the Unicorn Princess, I love all that I see. [This message has been edited by Alwye (edited 06-17-99).] |
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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
reminds me of that lovely fantasy movie with the very young Tom Cruise...forgot the title though |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Thanks very much, elvira. ------------------ *Krista Knutson* "Your kiss upon my face feels like a brush with grace, baby thats all it takes to take me higher..." SHeDaisy |
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Misty Rayne New Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 8Dassel,Minn.,USA |
I REALLY do want to put your poetry on my poetry-homepage! I have lovely jpegs to match your words!! Misty Rayne [This message has been edited by Misty Rayne (edited 08-14-99).] |
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Devin Junior Member
since 1999-08-23
Posts 29Oviedo,Fl, USA |
I loved this poem!! I am just in love with unicorns, faeries, and other fantasy stuff!! Keep up the good work!!! ------------------ Never lose hope, even the darkest nights have ends. |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Nailed another one I see. I feel like all my replies are sounding the same, all your work is excellent. ------------------ Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings? DreamEvil© |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Thank you all. ------------------ *Krista Knutson* I see the world through the loving eyes of my heart, and suffer the pain of unfulfilled visions. -- Daniel L. Miller |
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Neha New Member
since 1999-08-24
Posts 8 |
That was an absolutely enchanting poem u've written it is really beautiful and full of pleasantness.It's a cocktail of And they lived happily ever after fairy tails and other unicorn tails. It really was good. |
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