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Alwye
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In the space between moments

0 posted 1999-06-16 01:44 AM


Beyond the rolling clouds of white,
I see a beautiful land, lustrous and bright.
Upon the soft wings of the wind I fly,
Longing to know the land below, wondering if I should dare to try.

I gaze at grand waterfalls, oceans, and eyes in the mist,
And down I descend, unable to resist.
I leave the coldness of Earth behind,
To know the purest of souls, the ones like mine.

A unicorn greets me, eyes shining like stars,
And she instantly knows I have come from afar.
Her melodious voice whispers in the wind,
And she offers me her love, for we are of kin.

I follow the gentle being into the night,
Her horn, ribboned in gold, is my guiding light.
A shower of fairies show us the way,
They guide us to the forest, for there I shall forever stay.

I have never left this beautiful place,
Never again laid eyes on another human face,
For I am the chosen one of this land of eternity,
I am the Unicorn Princess, I love all that I see.

[This message has been edited by Alwye (edited 06-17-99).]

© Copyright 1999 Krista Botterill - All Rights Reserved
elvira
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since 1999-07-06
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1 posted 1999-08-12 04:51 AM


reminds me of that lovely fantasy movie with the very young Tom Cruise...forgot the title though
Alwye
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In the space between moments
2 posted 1999-08-12 10:33 PM


Thanks very much, elvira.

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*Krista Knutson*

"Your kiss upon my face feels like a brush with grace, baby thats all it takes to take me higher..." SHeDaisy

Misty Rayne
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3 posted 1999-08-14 11:23 AM


I REALLY do want to put your poetry on my poetry-homepage! I have lovely jpegs to match your words!!

Misty Rayne

[This message has been edited by Misty Rayne (edited 08-14-99).]

Devin
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4 posted 1999-08-23 08:22 AM


I loved this poem!! I am just in love with unicorns, faeries, and other fantasy stuff!! Keep up the good work!!!

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DreamEvil
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5 posted 1999-08-24 03:54 PM


Nailed another one I see. I feel like all my replies are sounding the same, all your work is excellent.

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Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings?
DreamEvil©



Alwye
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In the space between moments
6 posted 1999-08-24 09:46 PM


Thank you all.

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*Krista Knutson*

I see the world through the loving eyes of my heart, and suffer the pain of unfulfilled visions. -- Daniel L. Miller



Neha
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7 posted 1999-08-25 07:11 AM


That was an absolutely enchanting poem u've written it is really beautiful and full of pleasantness.It's a cocktail of And they lived happily ever after fairy tails and other unicorn tails. It really was good.
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