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since 1999-06-29
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0 posted 1999-06-29 11:15 PM

To any who read this.

I offer inspiration.
To believe in one’s self.

I offer hope.
That tommorow will come.
And when it comes you can handle it.

I offer security.
That you are loved.
If the world shuns and laughs.
I will still love you.

I offer comfort.
I will always help you.
I will not turn my back.

I offer you wisdom.
Or at least I think so.
I was nearly driven to the grave at 15 by my own hand.
And a shadow that lorded over me. Would I ever fill his shoes?

I offer peace of mind.
I listen and do not judge.
Your secrets to all others are hidden.
I offer you forgivness.

Everybody who reads this. Be considerate. The difference between a compliment and an insult can be the difference between life and death. For me it was. I’ve now dedicated my life to helping others. The greatest reward is knowing that I’ve done something with my life. If anybody, I mean anybody needs something. No matter how big it seems let me know. I make dreams come true.

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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850
In the space between moments
1 posted 1999-06-30 03:51 PM

Wow, what a blessing to recieve. Already, I see a truly grand person beneath those exquisitely written words. I thank you very much for your words and I hope you share more with us.

*Krista Knutson*

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since 1999-06-20
Posts 41
White Bear Lake, Minnesota, U.S.A
2 posted 1999-06-30 06:59 PM

Thank you for your kind and reassuring words that EVERYONE needs to hear. I agree with everythig you said. I am so happy that you are making an influence in people's lives. Way to Go, and thanks again! I wish you the best of everything.
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since 1999-06-30
Posts 6
Oyster Bay, NSW, Australia
3 posted 1999-06-30 07:41 PM

I've been through a hell of a lot in life already. I know what you are saying cause I feel the same.
Write to me, if you want to talk

since 1999-06-21
Posts 75
Florissant, Missouri, USA
4 posted 1999-07-01 12:04 PM

i read this just now and i feel really strange. i'm not sure if it's good or bad. but, everything you wrote, it was like it was about my life. i know how it is and maybe i have tomuch empathy for people.....


~songs are only poems with music~

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since 1999-06-29
Posts 2
Bainbridge Is. WA
5 posted 1999-07-01 10:55 PM

Wow, this was a truly inspiring piece of work. Your words answered alot of questions that I've been asking myself recently about my life. Thank you very much.


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since 1999-07-02
Posts 551
6 posted 1999-07-04 01:12 AM

I really love this poem and it really makes a lot of sense to me.
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