When I'm Gone (please respond)

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Teen Poetry #1

When I'm Gone (please respond)

chollagrl4
Member

since 1999-08-10

Posts 65
brick

0 posted 1999-09-27 09:02 PM

You'll be sorry,
one day, I know.
You'll be so sad when I go.
You'll be sorry,
you will cry,
you will break down when I die.
This time you cant hurt me,
this time you will care.
this time when u call my name,
i will never be there.
No longer can u draw my tears,
no longer can u make my fears.
Your power is gone,
in the blink of an eye,
because before u hurt me again,
I will die.
You'll be sorry,
so many tears you'll shed,
you'll be so sad,
when I'm dead.

*~*butterfly*~*
Junior Member

since 1999-07-26

Posts 28
minnesota

1 posted 1999-09-27 09:25 PM

i like it a lot, i USE to feel like that. i still am not over it, but it will get easier to deal with, just pretend he doesn't exist. nice work

Taeira
Junior Member

since 1999-09-17

Posts 26

2 posted 1999-09-28 05:36 AM

what u wrote is exactly the way i feel torwards my dad..i was just wondering who that poem was about?

[email protected]
Junior Member

since 1999-09-26

Posts 36
Whitesboro,NY,USA

3 posted 1999-09-28 05:16 PM

who is it?your poem contained real pain.look up though.think of the song "i will survive" ha ha.always makes me feel better.

Melissa

[This message has been edited by [email protected] (edited 09-28-1999).]

chollagrl4
Member

since 1999-08-10

Posts 65
brick

4 posted 1999-09-28 05:51 PM

this poem is about my boyfriend. he makes me cry a lot but i love him

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

5 posted 2007-11-13 07:40 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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