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chollagrl4
Member
since 1999-08-10
Posts 65
brick

0 posted 1999-09-27 09:02 PM


You'll be sorry,
one day, I know.
You'll be so sad when I go.
You'll be sorry,
you will cry,
you will break down when I die.
This time you cant hurt me,
this time you will care.
this time when u call my name,
i will never be there.
No longer can u draw my tears,
no longer can u make my fears.
Your power is gone,
in the blink of an eye,
because before u hurt me again,
I will die.
You'll be sorry,
so many tears you'll shed,
you'll be so sad,
when I'm dead.

© Copyright 1999 chollagrl4 - All Rights Reserved
*~*butterfly*~*
Junior Member
since 1999-07-26
Posts 28
minnesota
1 posted 1999-09-27 09:25 PM


i like it a lot, i USE to feel like that. i still am not over it, but it will get easier to deal with, just pretend he doesn't exist. nice work
Taeira
Junior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 26

2 posted 1999-09-28 05:36 AM


what u wrote is exactly the way i feel torwards my dad..i was just wondering who that poem was about?
Mark4Him@juno.com
Junior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 36
Whitesboro,NY,USA
3 posted 1999-09-28 05:16 PM


who is it?your poem contained real pain.look up though.think of the song "i will survive" ha ha.always makes me feel better.

Melissa

[This message has been edited by Mark4Him@juno.com (edited 09-28-1999).]

chollagrl4
Member
since 1999-08-10
Posts 65
brick
4 posted 1999-09-28 05:51 PM


this poem is about my boyfriend. he makes me cry a lot but i love him
Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
5 posted 2007-11-13 07:40 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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