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Teen Poetry #1

Butterfly

Raven
Member

since 1999-06-14

Posts 67
Hopewell Jct, New York, USA

0 posted 1999-09-27 06:29 PM

I feel so paralyzed
He's ripped off my wings
I'll never get away

Suffocation
Please let me breathe
It's been so long.

You think you love me
I hate you now
Will you ever set me free?

Goodbye
From your butterfly
I finally got away

I opened my cage
and flew off with rage
You'll never forget me

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"They sing the stories of the present, of people trapped in a shadow world" ~Charlotte Seley~

Systematic Decay
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

1 posted 1999-09-27 07:59 PM

I liked that poem, simple and to the point. I can imagine a butterfly, fragile yet enraged flying off into the world.
Great imagery

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-

Alwye

Moderator

Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

2 posted 1999-09-27 09:47 PM

Stunning Imagery, Raven. Truly beautiful work, I'm glad to see you post again!

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*Krista Knutson*

Wise is he who faces the frailty of man with the strength of an understanding heart. -- Daniel L. Miller

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

3 posted 2007-11-13 07:38 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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