Teen Poetry #1 |
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Butterfly |
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Raven Member
since 1999-06-14
Posts 67Hopewell Jct, New York, USA |
I feel so paralyzed He's ripped off my wings I'll never get away Suffocation Please let me breathe It's been so long. You think you love me I hate you now Will you ever set me free? Goodbye From your butterfly I finally got away I opened my cage and flew off with rage You'll never forget me ------------------ "They sing the stories of the present, of people trapped in a shadow world" ~Charlotte Seley~ |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
I liked that poem, simple and to the point. I can imagine a butterfly, fragile yet enraged flying off into the world. Great imagery ![]() ------------------ "Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage." -Billy Corgan- |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Stunning Imagery, Raven. Truly beautiful work, I'm glad to see you post again! ![]() ------------------ *Krista Knutson* Wise is he who faces the frailty of man with the strength of an understanding heart. -- Daniel L. Miller |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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