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Teen Poetry #1

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Tabitha
New Member

since 1999-09-14

Posts 2
Duncan, Oklahoma, U.S.

0 posted 1999-09-24 05:12 AM

This is a poem I wrote for my best friend that lives on the other side of the world and is called "Best Friends"

Best friends
They are like honey bees
They always go together

They are like roses
One might be a bud
While one might be full bloomed

Roses unlike friends
Don't last long

Some die young
Some die old
Some even die before they are bloomed

We are two of the lucky ones
We survived
Together

We still have the rest of our lives to live
Unlike the unfortunate

May we, together
Live our lives
In full bloom.

By: Tabitha A.

Tinfang Gelion
Junior Member

since 1999-09-23

Posts 14
Rochester

1 posted 1999-09-24 01:50 PM

I thought this was an excellent metaphor, of the honeybee and roses. Let us all be happy bumblebees.... LOL

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

2 posted 2007-11-13 07:27 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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