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Teen Poetry #1

17 and Counting

DoeEyes
Junior Member

since 1999-06-20

Posts 15
Florida

0 posted 1999-06-26 04:15 AM

17 and counting.
Where did all the years go?
Have I done any good?
The answer is no.
I've only been selfish, snobbish and rude.
What good have I done?
The answer is none.
At least that's what I think.
I pray that I'm wrong.
All I've ever wanted is to be happy,
To fit in, to belong.
Well I got what I want,
Everything has its price.
Mine was too high,
I should've done good, been nice.
And still downhill I go.
When will this stop?
I may never know.
17 and counting.
Where did all the years go?

katrina
Junior Member

since 1999-06-20

Posts 41
White Bear Lake, Minnesota, U.S.A

1 posted 1999-06-27 12:30 PM

Very good poem! I know how it feels like to think you haven't done anyhing right. Your poetry is excellent..keep it up!

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Aprender
Junior Member

since 1999-06-22

Posts 40
Rohill, NJ, USA

2 posted 1999-06-28 01:09 PM

I like that..evry1 feels that way sometimes...but I'm sure you've done a lot of good in your life...but ther's always room for more :-)

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