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CelticKat
Junior Member
since 1999-09-20
Posts 22
St augustine Florida

0 posted 1999-09-20 01:36 PM



Too many days have gone by
Without the utter of
'I Love You" Tell me were
Did our flame go?
I want to know.

How do I hold in the pain I feel?
I want to make you see the love
I hold inside for you.

Touch me once more
The way you use to
I miss the passion we
Use to have.

If I had the chance to
Hold you close once
More, I would not tell
That I miss you, Or
That I can't go on
Without you no,
I would say, "I Love You


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Act your shoe size.

And let your self be free. just be you.

© Copyright 1999 CelticKat - All Rights Reserved
StratMatt
Member
since 1999-09-19
Posts 87
Macomb, IL, U.S.A.
1 posted 1999-09-20 10:07 PM


Oh God.
This poem gave me a flashback.
CelticKat: Your poetry is really giving me haunting images of my last real romantic relationship.
It's very good.
Keep posting please.


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"Lost time is never found again." -Ben Franklin.

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