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Aquarius
New Member
since 1999-09-20
Posts 6
Norton,Ma. USA

0 posted 1999-09-20 01:01 PM


What a wonderful morning.
I'm alive.
What a beautiful day.
I'm alive.
What a comfortable warmth the sun gives.
I'm alive.
What a beautiful song the bird's sing.
I'm alive.
What fragrances that linger in the air.
I'm alive.
What colorful landscapes of blossoms.
I'm alive.
What a wonderous feeling to smile .
I'm alive.
What a secure feeling to breathe.
I'm alive.
What a wonderful life.
I am alive.


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To handle yourself, use your head;
To handle others, use your heart.

© Copyright 1999 Aquarius - All Rights Reserved
Systematic Decay
Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........
1 posted 1999-09-20 08:27 PM


It must be great to have a life as wonderful as that.....
To greet the morning light, instead of loathing it as I do.....
It must be nice to live your life, as opposed to begruding time as I do.....
Because time is what I have plenty of.....
Nothing to do with it.....
Nothing that will matter though, because nobody will care.
I do hopw whatever it is that makes you feel so joyous stays.....but also, don't be unprepared, because if your world collapses, its best to have a backup plan.

"I miss the comfort in being sad"
-Kurt Cobain-

Aquarius
New Member
since 1999-09-20
Posts 6
Norton,Ma. USA
2 posted 1999-09-21 11:51 PM


I'm sorry that you feel your worth is of no use or care to anyone. I'll tell ya something though, if I passed by you someday, and all you had was a smile, that would be enough to brighten my day. Sometimes you don't need a whole heck of a lot to have worth. Thank you for your response. It's hard sometimes to stay happy, but it feels so good when I am .

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To handle yourself, use your head;
To handle others, use your heart.

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