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Echo Rhayne
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since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA

0 posted 1999-09-18 06:51 PM


Have you ever felt like nobody
just a tiny speck of air
when everyone's around you
and you are just not there?
When you are very lonely
and no one seems to care
when everyone ignores you
and acts like you're not there?
Have you ever felt like nobody
when friends make fun of you
when people say we're friends
but it really sint true?
Sometimes you feel like you're unloved
and no one wants to care
when everyone has a friend
and you're alone somewhere?

Have you ever felt like nobody
just a tiny speck of dirt
you're always getting stepped on
and always getting hurt?
I guess if you have
then you know how I feel
but because I am a person
in time will I heal?


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Systematic Decay
Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........
1 posted 1999-09-18 06:58 PM


I know exactly how you feel......im sure time will heal it, as time heals all wounds......but i have yet to heal........the betrayals and outcastings are so close together i dont have time to heal.......

"I'm on my way down now
I'd like to take you with me"
-Marilyn Manson-

Echo Rhayne
Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA
2 posted 1999-09-18 06:59 PM


I know what you mean...Sometimes I feel like I will never heal because everything keeps happening, there is no time in between to allow me to heal.
Jay_Jay
Junior Member
since 1999-09-18
Posts 38
San Diego, CA. USA
3 posted 1999-09-18 07:05 PM


Yes I have felt like nobody, sometimes I still do, but if you give things time eventually you will heal, although sometimes it doesnt look like that is a possibility.
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