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Elizabeth
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0 posted 1999-09-06 08:22 PM


Hoot, this was another terrific poem. You described it very well-the woman, her tears and the rain, and the woman's feelings. I could just imagine a rainy day and a woman standing in a window and crying...by the way, I am glad you started to write again!

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*Elizabeth*

"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."


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Alicat
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1 posted 1999-09-06 08:53 PM


It works!!! Thanks Elizabeth for trying out my simple notion.
Also, to add a link, use the (a href; /a) tags.
If it doesn't work at first, tinker until it does.

Alicat

[This message has been edited by Alicat (edited 09-06-99).]

Elizabeth
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2 posted 1999-09-06 09:21 PM


I am technologically deficient! lol

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*Elizabeth*

"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."


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3 posted 1999-09-16 09:50 AM


Elizabeth......thanks

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus

Elizabeth
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4 posted 1999-09-16 02:16 PM


Any time Hoot!

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"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."


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