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The most Beautiful thing I've ever read |
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Saxoness![]()
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas ![]() |
Hey guys, I'm not sure if it's ok to post this poem here, but since it's not by me, and I want to post it because of the way it made me feel, maybe it is ok. I ALSO want to say that Desperado didn't write this poem for me, I just happened to read it on the main site, and I thought it was the most beatiful poem I've ever read. (especially this part "and in the night I'll hold you until the sun appears" wow thats so great) Evermore by desperado wait just a moment in time freeze the movie in your mind put aside the whispers filter out the doubt look into my eyes ignore the muted shout don't you wish to melt away? into the golden sun? don't you want to whisk away, and have a little fun? aren't you sick of pain and fear inside your life all I know inside of me I want you as my wife I'm tired of the race I'm ill with blank disgrace I want the world to leave us be I want the world to set us free take my hand and smile you can let those tears fall I'll make it worth your while and always give it all through good and bad I'll love you through thick and thin I'll stay from the blinking of the sun to the fading of the day and in the night I'll hold you until the sun appears I'll take away your sorrows, and cast away your fears so let our love combine us and let our spirits soar just take my hand within you and I'll love you evermore "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
awwww..That is so beautiful I love it "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This should go in the Awwwwwwww post in the alley ![]() |
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This IS a beautiful piece... but what exactly do you feel as you read it? It must have been powerful, since you decided to post it in here! ![]() |
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Saxoness![]()
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
Man, it really took my breath away. The feelings expressed here...I would definately want a proposal like this. It made me feel simply wonderful. I had to share it with others. "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone |
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Fading Away![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
This is a beautiful poem! I agree Dopes, it should go in the alley! Wow.. what a great poem. I'm going to have to add this to my library. Thanks for sharing. --Marie I never thought that you would ever be the one to let me down. I guess that just goes to show how wrong I always am. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Well, aren't those words enough to melt a women's heart? ![]() This is beautiful, and I hadn't had the pleasure of reading it before. |
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
That is sweet! I'll have to find it on the main site and print it. Thanks for letting us know about it Angela. ![]() |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Marry this guy!!!!!!!!!! Kathleen Blake |
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Saxoness![]()
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
lol@Kathleen ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
For those of you who want it for your library, here's the link. /pip/Forum4/HTML/003186.html It was so beautiful I had to find it. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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