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David Generous Junior Member
since 2000-12-15
Posts 13 |
The way she smiles makes me happy When she looks at me with her blue eyes I feel her love Her love touches deeply in my soul longing for her touch I feel a sense of peace When she holds me, I feel like crying tears of Joy She’s an angel that God sends in my dreams to comfort me Someday I will hold my angel and she will bring me to his Kingdom I’ll depart this world in peace my angel will take all fears away |
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~*~PrettyGirly~*~ Member
since 2000-11-04
Posts 83Fitchburg Ma Usa |
hey it's the little devil. sweet poem i like it bye.. ~*~PG~*~  A romance last forever you want it, A friendship last a life time |
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a_little_girl Member
since 2000-05-08
Posts 307San Alejandro, HI, USA |
Wow....really nice work you have here...I like the way you described a first encounter w. love...ah...love... < !signature--> "My soul lives in love, walks with serenity, and dies in violence." --ALG [This message has been edited by a_little_girl (edited 12-27-2000).] |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Beautiful poem David...best of luck with your love.  Live and let live. ~*SeLf PrOcLaImEd FrEaK oF nAtUrE*~ |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Good job on this one david......i suggest you post in Teen forum or in the Open poetry forums.......you'd get more replies. Good one though!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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