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allan
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since 2000-04-09
Posts 620
On the road

0 posted 2000-05-25 12:45 PM


immersed in unreality
suddenly
only a kiss,
but the first

& all life
still beating
outside this pulse

goes on
without me



Blush!
I posted here and it's not for poetry is it? Ooops!



[This message has been edited by allan (edited 05-25-2000).]

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Moon Dust
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since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK
1 posted 2000-05-26 06:33 PM


Doesn't matter they are still feelings. Lovely poem  btw
X Angel
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since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521
Oregon
2 posted 2000-05-26 06:36 PM


Lovely poem...I am moving it to The Corner Pub..so it can be appreciated by the other poets more fully...
~Heather

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