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zippi Member
since 2004-03-31
Posts 56California |
I feel as though I've been here before And yet I'm locked outside the door Why I wonder, should it be That no one wants to hear from me? Am I not made of flesh and blood Just as I'm sure, are you Why than do you shun my light Does it not shine as true? Let me in, I beg of you Let my voice be heard I flutter just outside your door A lonely winter bird. Rene` |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
"I flutter just outside your door, A lonely winter bird" I like those lines, but the whole thing is really pretty  Lizzie "Time has told me not to ask for more, one day our ocean will find its shore" ~Nick Drake |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
How strage a coincidence - I have chickadees sitting on everything possible staring at me outside my window, wondering where I put their feeder, and then I sat for a second before putting it back to read this? Anyway, it is a lovely verse, and really wish it was posted in Open so others could read it. Beautifully done!
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
I remember this from long ago - the feeling of being outside - wrote a lot of poetry about it when I was young - then I discovered, I had to become comfortable within my own skin first - before I was willing to let others in - ironic, but I think I was the one keeping others out by my feelings of not being good enough - thank Heaven for the years of passing and growth and coming in to my own skin - Hugs - this is well understood - I too think it would do well in open -  SusanEvery action generates a force that returns to us in like kind . . . let us choose compassion and love |
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