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patience_iago
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0 posted 2006-10-18 07:26 PM



Does anyone ever feel that, making a perfect poem that doesnt rhyme is harder than making one that does. I always seem to love poetry more if it doesnt have a rhyme, if it is just so beautifully written without any of those coordinating words.

"There are some days where i believe i might die of an overdose of satisfaction"
-Dali

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sandgrain
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1 posted 2006-10-18 10:13 PM


Oh, yes!  I've always had the rhyming type go through my mind, so that's how I write, but I've tried writing free verse but mine  seem so choppy and far too long.  The more I tried the more I appreciate the free verse so many write so well.

Rae

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2 posted 2006-10-19 11:32 PM


yea i agree it it acually hard for me to write a poem that doesn't have my usual rhyme scheme and when i do it doesn't seem to sound good, it doesn't make any sense...

hunnie*

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patience_iago
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3 posted 2006-10-21 06:33 PM


See for me, its so hard to find a rhyme that fits, and if the rhyme does i think it feels out of place and sounds stupid.

"There are some days where i believe i might die of an overdose of satisfaction"
-Dali

Juju
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4 posted 2006-10-22 11:00 PM


every one has a natural way of writing.  Like I have natural meter.  I stink at stressing though.  I usually just write and it comes out. every one is different. I like metaphors. I like em allot.

-Juju

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Who thinks really deep thougts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silient all these Years, Tori Amos

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