Language Universal(Tanka, inspired by Uriah)

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Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

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0 posted 2006-05-22 07:27 PM

Something so simple
existing through history
all nations can speak
a language universal.
Yet peace, remains unspoken.

seek the flame within yourself
and let your soul be cleansed by
the fire of love. Axel Ekenstierna

Inspired by Uriah /pip/Forum95/HTML/000011.html

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

1 posted 2006-05-22 07:35 PM

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

2 posted 2006-05-22 08:42 PM

wonderfully written, yet sad indeed

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.

3 posted 2006-05-22 08:50 PM

YES!! Well done Donna!

Hugs~Nancy

~ Trace my body with your words,
in doing so, you touch my heart ~

Martie

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California

4 posted 2006-05-22 08:51 PM

Donna...Well inspired!

XOx Uriah xOX
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since 2006-02-11

Posts 1403
Virginia

5 posted 2006-05-23 12:56 PM

Ah  Good job!   Wonderful write!

Yes, it sadly appears true.
But I believe it is constantly spoken...just rarely heard, over egos shouting.

I am honored by the thought that I somehow played any part in the inspiration of this.

There is personal intuition, personal consciousness that give us "personal" truths.
They may differ from "individual" to "individual".
Then there is...  Impersonal Intuition
Ultimate Consciousness... That "seems" to come from "other" than us.  That give us Ultimate Truths    Universal Truths    That are true for ALL.
This is the source of the inspiration.
This is the true essence of "each" of "us".

It wears you well.

((( Donna )))      :: bows ::

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

6 posted 2006-05-23 04:45 PM

Yes, Donna, so well put. I also found Uriah's response very interesting.

- Owl

picturegramic
Member

since 2006-05-16

Posts 112

7 posted 2006-05-23 09:59 PM

Smile....you just spoke all languages!
Enjoyable read.

picturegramic :)

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

8 posted 2006-05-23 10:03 PM

Too true, too sad.....wonderfully written!

Melissa~

Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world!

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

9 posted 2006-05-23 10:37 PM

Peace, as elusive as a serpent slithering
across a bed of hot coals on a summer's
eve... millions have tried, fought and
died in the quest for peace....

Will Rhyme
Member

since 2006-05-22

Posts 149

10 posted 2006-05-23 10:53 PM

"Yet peace, remains unspoken."

wonderful words you write, yet, so, oh, so, sadly true.

Will

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

11 posted 2006-05-24 07:12 AM

AMEN....you've inspired perhaps a song within us all....hopefully, someday, maybe?

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