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marcel
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0 posted 2005-08-03 03:06 AM



Insignificant


A homeless man awakens with a sighing smile
Folding up his card board home
Grateful to the blaring sun
As a policeman watches from across the street
Drinking coffee and eating a jelly donut
Around the corner taxi cab drivers wash their moneymakers
And street vendors stump out cigarette butts on graffiti painted slabs
While businessmen pretending to read “The Wall Street Journal”
Blindly toss silver coins to the newspaperman
Unseen to the world outside are old folks in small apartments
Thanking God for allowing them to live another day
And on the other side of town a yellow bus drives to the suburbs
To the dismay of black youngsters who integrate their thoughts on “Bussing”
A pigeon sh-ts
A squirrel scratches a nut
And that same homeless man
Prays it doesn’t rain.

Marcel



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nakdthoughts
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1 posted 2005-08-03 05:58 AM


seeing the world through your eyes~~

M

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2 posted 2005-08-03 06:41 AM


loved the last 4 lines.  enjoyed this one

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

LeeJ
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3 posted 2005-08-03 06:57 AM


this poem makes me so sad/angry at the same time....as I really hate it, when society, cannot/no, a better word is, refuses to take care of their own, rejecting them...it will not be long until the money mongers pay their dues, unfortunately, they will drag all of us down with them...

Thank you for this...it should make every one who reads feel sheer humility...


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