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J.Samm
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0 posted 2005-03-19 09:04 AM



"Studies Show Poets Die Early"
A health update screamed at me
Would this be reason for alarm
My piptalk friends, let's see.

Poets live on passion,it read
They thrive, even in pain
They romanticize death
and despair,and disdain

Poets are at risk for heart attack:
They rarely move around
They drink wine in their gardens
And long for things that can never be found

Of course, I'll add (this is sad to say)
Some poets even take their own life away
So scientists and doctors all agree:
Most poets do not live to be sixty three

As a young poet,I do declare
It matters not if I'll ever grow silver hair
I live each moment in rhythm and rhyme
I dont care if it would eat up my time.

Poets die early?
That's pure baloney!
When poets write,they live forever
Don't you just agree?



© Copyright 2005 Jasmine Sagge - All Rights Reserved
James_A_Fraser
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1 posted 2005-03-19 09:22 AM


This one feels as if he may....in Passions, at least. It may be that Jamie has posted his last poem. I'm that disheartened. Sometimes I wonder if this was ever a place where I should have put my work.

On the other hand, I may post twenty poems in the next week -- let's see what happens.



~~J

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2 posted 2005-03-19 10:26 AM


Poets are at risk for heart attack:
They rarely move around
They drink wine in their gardens
And long for things that can never be found


My heart is good....
I am always on the move..
I don't drink...
I only long for things I can see...and then..the longing tis but brief.


We poets love life I do believe.

Well written piece to ponder. Enjoyed.
hugs, Chris

Martie
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3 posted 2005-03-19 11:39 AM


J. Samm

"Of course, I'll add (this is sad to say)
Some poets even take their own life away
So scientists and doctors all agree:
Most poets do not live to be sixty three"

I don't have much time left then, but belive that I have a life time! Enjoyed this!

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4 posted 2005-03-19 11:56 AM


J.Samm
They try, they try. Enjoyed

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5 posted 2005-03-19 01:26 PM


Jasmine~
Oh my, what a thinker you are~
I smiled my way through some of the thoughts and thought my way through some of the smiles~

Early ? ... I'm hanging in for at least midnight !!
Or ... is that sitting the fence of 'early' ? ... okay, make it midnight-o-eight~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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6 posted 2005-03-19 01:48 PM


But without poetry... who'd want to live anyway? *S*
soul drifter
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7 posted 2005-03-19 02:48 PM


Hmm, guess I'd better get busy writing more, so my family can publish my colossal poetic brilliance after I'm gone.
Great poem. Brought a smile to my face.

J.Samm
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8 posted 2005-03-19 05:58 PM


thank you guys...don't worry,we'll challenge that article and live up to more than a hundred...or at least we'll try
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9 posted 2005-03-19 07:07 PM


one can hope what they say is wrong
but it does ring a bell with me

except mine's not wine, it's Bud Light

Enchantress
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10 posted 2005-03-19 07:12 PM


Very interesting statistics here.
I do hope they are wrong..
or I don't have much time left...
will have to write faster LOL.
Good stuff!!
Hugs~Nancy

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul

Dakota
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11 posted 2005-03-19 07:21 PM


I have to say to the statistics I disagree.
Atleast thats the way it feels to me.
Poets live in the verse and prose.
Like everyone here at Passions surely knows.
They live forever in the poems they write.
Sharing the warmth from their hearts each night.

Loved the write!

Janet Marie
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12 posted 2005-03-19 07:40 PM


And long for things that can never be found
=============================

I just loved that line....

I love this whole clever inspire...
you have a very cute idea for a poem and you put a fun twist on it... very well done POET JS

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~ take only memories ... leave only footprints ~

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13 posted 2005-03-19 07:43 PM


If nothing else, you will draw poets like
flies with the title.  Nice write and I
better start writing faster, much faster.

icebox
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14 posted 2005-03-19 07:51 PM


Ah well...
JamesMichael
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15 posted 2005-03-19 08:48 PM


Interesting...I have noticed that there were times I was writing when I should have visited the health club or just took a walk...but when I take a walk I find myself writing...James
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16 posted 2005-03-19 10:39 PM


"I live each moment in rhythm and rhyme"


~ and pray that buys me lots more time!


For the love of poetry!
EA




Indigo
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17 posted 2005-03-19 10:44 PM


Bravo, she said while sipping a glass of merlot amidst the cherry blossoms...

Indigo

J.Samm
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18 posted 2005-03-20 06:19 AM


thank you very much for the interesting replies...i read this article from a local health magazine but the study was conducted in the United States...well,i don't think survey results could hold true for everyone...it really made me think, though.
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