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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2005-03-19 02:42 AM

Then She Comes

Sometimes she goes away.
As she says, "We're not
married." so I have no say.

She likes to believe that
she's a geographic traveler,
a citizen of no specific
locality, so she travels
to exotic foreign lands,
and when the wanderers
spirit is satayed, then
she comes back to me.

JamesLee
March18
2005

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2005-03-19 02:53 AM

I may not always "get it" James, sometimes I think too much, but I saw this as a lovely personification of ocean...

and it's been awhile since I've read you, and for that I apologize.

I liked the gentle tone of this, and it left me a bit rippled, like the beach.

Enjoyed.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

2 posted 2005-03-19 06:22 AM

I like this one, too, James. Good to see you.
Hugs,
Ethel

miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

3 posted 2005-03-19 08:44 AM

I guess I had thought it was about a young woman with the heart of a gypsy, but after reading Serenity's reply, I visualize the coming and going of the tides.  Very pretty imagery, inviting interpretation...

I believe this is one of your best.  I'd like to keep it if I may.

               miscellanea

J.Samm
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since 2004-01-12

Posts 415
Iloilo City, Philippines

4 posted 2005-03-19 08:58 AM

tell us, James is this about an ocean indeed? very intriguing! mysterious write,a good one!

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2005-03-19 08:45 PM

Thank you serenity, miscellania, garysgirl and J.Samm for the nice and surprising responses...I wish I could say that I wrote this with the ocean in mind...or with a mysterious double meaning...and I can see the ocean connection now that you have mentioned it...but this was written about a long time friend who is a travel writer...and she loves to travel...and goes at a moments notice...James

J.Samm
Member

since 2004-01-12

Posts 415
Iloilo City, Philippines

6 posted 2005-03-20 06:13 AM

oh, i see...but it's a good write nevertheless

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