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Magnus
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0 posted 2005-03-20 10:21 AM


Embrace me,  trace me..
Touch me most lightly, bask the
waters cool that graze lips of
passion. Drain the flask of my
yearning and quench me as flames of
longing lick the heels of my
wander.

And, as the cool of night hugs
the heat of embrace, still me...

that I might rest in dreams of
linger, sifting sands of remember
as I taste the soul of your ember
once more.

[This message has been edited by Magnus (03-21-2005 07:11 PM).]

© Copyright 2005 Barry J. Tackett - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2005-03-20 10:39 AM


Barry,
Make sure she gets a copy of this one.

suthern
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2 posted 2005-03-20 11:06 AM


This is exquisite... and Seymour is right... if you haven't already... give this to her! *S*
Enchantress
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3 posted 2005-03-20 12:21 PM


Oh WOW!!  A huge *SIGH* could be heard all over Canada just now!
Wonderful softly sensual write Barry!
Hugs~Nancy

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul

Sunshine
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4 posted 2005-03-20 01:11 PM


What Sy said...
passing shadows
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5 posted 2005-03-20 04:53 PM


whew! wow
Martie
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6 posted 2005-03-20 05:18 PM


Barry....You have some heat under that hat, don't ya now?  It's wonderful, what you wrote!  
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7 posted 2005-03-21 07:06 PM


Wow...beautiful!

Eric

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