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1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2004-12-11 10:38 AM



Pass

sometimes
there is no proof
on the outside
no marks
of memories
inside we are
just all held
together with
the stitches of time
and the only
good thing is…
is that the past
has passed

just some words cut out
from the diary of my heart



© Copyright 2004 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2004-12-11 10:41 AM


1slick_lady
That's one way of looking at it. Enjoyed the look.

icebox
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since 2003-05-03
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in the shadows
2 posted 2004-12-11 10:46 AM


"inside we are
just all held
together with
the stitches of time"

Yup!  That, and duct tape...

*smile*

passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2004-12-11 10:50 AM


yep
choshi
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since 2004-01-01
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New York
4 posted 2004-12-11 10:52 AM


Nice one.....~P
Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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Waukegan
5 posted 2004-12-11 01:50 PM



I am not a person.
I am a succession of persons
Held together by memory.

When the string breaks,
The beads scatter.

Lindley Williams Hubbell

RSWells
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since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533

6 posted 2004-12-11 02:45 PM


Pass-passing-past. The lava sets, an island solidifies and nowhere on earth is the loam more fertile at that point. Enjoyed another compact write.
Ericc
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since 2003-01-31
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7 posted 2004-12-11 03:17 PM


Great write Helen!

Eric

serenity blaze
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8 posted 2004-12-11 10:27 PM


Yet
there are
some moments that
I keep filed
under skin
so I can
live them again
praying I might dream
them new.



love ya ladyslick

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