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Open Poetry #34
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Don_Juan
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since 2004-04-08
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Far from where I am going
0 posted 2004-12-11 04:21 PM

Ice white pillars stand
in a morning stretch
towards the sky
frozen and calm
surrounded by an ice sea
flowing in sun drenched majesty
brilliant oranges and reds
break through gray sheets of giving
taking hold
in iridescent ambience of
the sky.
waves of warmth rain down
and all is well.

(written in my spare time while i was looking out the window. i attempted to make this flow a little bit easier than how it was written in my poem notebook. I hope you all enjoy.)

nice use of muffin

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exhale
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since 2003-06-13
Posts 646
Alberta,Canada
1 posted 2004-12-11 08:06 PM

this is beautiful
the words really paint an amazing picture.
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just out of reach
2 posted 2004-12-11 10:23 PM

Very nice. Enjoyed this piece. Chris

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