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babygirlwlove
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since 2004-10-10

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New York City

0 posted 2004-11-01 11:00 AM

there are days
you tend my heart
in a cage of flowers,
mire my wings
in tepid nectar, let it
simmer in its fiery skin,
with solely a catechism
of dahlia, lure
the gunmetal humming
bird of my desire
through the reclusive
pathways of the soul,
receding, the emergent hours
of obese noon, swoon
over the raised skin,
as the thorn woos
the wound in a dissonance
of blood, it floods
the eardrums with sunlight,
hours swarm near the exit,
imploring, the embroidery
of thirst wound around
the emaciated clavicle,
as it vanishes, like sap
into the furtive silence
of flowers.

2004 copyright babygirLPress

**Intoxicant to the SouL**

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

1 posted 2004-11-01 11:10 AM

I swear I heard
bees buzzing...

babygirlwlove
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since 2004-10-10

Posts 1180
New York City

2 posted 2004-11-01 11:11 AM

**LMAO**...Sunshine...you are so funny...wranx would say they were drums...lol

thanks for hitting this...
**babygirL**

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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

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Between the Lines

3 posted 2004-11-01 11:41 AM

~smiling~ as I read you and am left with such pleasant thoughts

M

babygirlwlove
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since 2004-10-10

Posts 1180
New York City

4 posted 2004-11-01 11:45 AM

M~

thank you for the smile...

**babygirL**

**Intoxicant to the SouL**

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

5 posted 2004-11-01 03:16 PM

there are days
you tend my heart
in a cage of flowers,

Just love the above lines.

Maree

Oh, you speak to me in riddles
and you speak to me in rhymes
My body aches to breathe your breath
Your words keep me alive
~Sarah McLachlan~

babygirlwlove
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since 2004-10-10

Posts 1180
New York City

6 posted 2004-11-01 03:19 PM

thank you, Maree...

love&light,
**babygirL**

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DavePage
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since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

7 posted 2004-11-01 03:22 PM

A very nice sensitive touch.

Very nice.

Dave

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.

8 posted 2004-11-01 03:38 PM

"you tend my heart
in a cage of flowers,"

Very lovely...so tender.
Hugs~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

babygirlwlove
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since 2004-10-10

Posts 1180
New York City

9 posted 2004-11-01 04:56 PM

Dave&Enchantress...thank you for stopping to read...

**babygirL**

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passing shadows
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displaced

10 posted 2004-11-01 09:18 PM

wonderfully done!

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

11 posted 2004-11-01 11:20 PM

You know I could almost feel that hummingbird's wings tickle I swear I could, for it definitely grazed my soul these tender words.

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

12 posted 2004-11-01 11:31 PM

Enjoyed...James

*Alli4000*

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The World of Poetry

13 posted 2004-11-01 11:42 PM

Beautful write . . . i loved the opening lines.

~Alli~

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Don’t cry because it’s over, smile because it happened...

babygirlwlove
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since 2004-10-10

Posts 1180
New York City

14 posted 2004-11-02 06:09 AM

thank you all for stopping in to read this...

love&light,
**BabygirL**

**Intoxicant to the SouL**

wranx
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since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

15 posted 2004-11-02 03:03 PM

Well see? In this I hear more sitar with the tabla *grin*

babygirlwlove
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since 2004-10-10

Posts 1180
New York City

16 posted 2004-11-02 03:12 PM

**LMAO**

thank you, dear wranx!

love&light,
**babygirL**

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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

17 posted 2004-11-03 07:25 AM

you've taken a realistic look above all else...and written a novel of love

babygirlwlove
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since 2004-10-10

Posts 1180
New York City

18 posted 2004-11-03 08:00 AM

LeeJ~

thank you for the kind words...

**babygirL**

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bslicker

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Posts 2321
state of mind

19 posted 2004-11-03 09:40 AM

nice write
bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

babygirlwlove
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since 2004-10-10

Posts 1180
New York City

20 posted 2004-11-03 09:47 AM

thank you, bernie...

**babygirl**

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Kevo
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since 2004-06-02

Posts 466
Navarro County, Texas, USA

21 posted 2004-11-16 01:45 AM

Beautiful, engaging, and written with great care and depth. It was such a captivating read I dove in several times. You have a gold mine of talent at your fingertips. Your command of our language paints some amazingly vibrant pictures. It's been several weeks since I have been involved. I stumbled onto this one and am so glad I did. Your talent adds great depth and gifts to this great community and left my jaw on the floor in awe. I am looking forward to reading more from you. This is a keeper!

Kevin

babygirlwlove
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since 2004-10-10

Posts 1180
New York City

22 posted 2004-11-16 06:34 AM

Kevin~

thank you for the warm reply...I look forward to reading more of you as well...

love&light,
**babygirL**

**Intoxicant to the SouL**

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