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stevebrklynnyc
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0 posted 2004-11-13 10:55 PM

Reaching out, a helping hand
Out of nowhere, there she stands

Reflection from the mirror
We see our self

Staring head on
Truth comes about

Life is funny
So they say
A new beginning
A shadow in the breeze

Move on now
No one can say
The puppet is our master
For this day

Tomorrow is here
We hear our calling
An undying wish
The crash is falling

Hope is cruel
It hurt's us deep
Master is calling
It lets you sleep

Possessed are we
There is no excuse
Help us now
Relieve our sorrow

Pitty for the weak
Is cast upon us
Cold hard truth
Is here tomorrow

© Copyright 2004 Stephen Capp - All Rights Reserved

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1 posted 2004-11-13 10:59 PM

thats pretty deep man.

~Express Yourself~

stevebrklynnyc
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2 posted 2004-11-13 11:09 PM

I know it is, thank you. A broken heart helps you write. I hate knowing what I know, but hey, life goes on.

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3 posted 2004-11-13 11:26 PM

*sigh* most people need a hand out at least once in their life

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4 posted 2004-11-14 06:18 PM

this is a very touching piece...nice work

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5 posted 2004-11-14 06:24 PM

Stephen~
You pen broken-hearted thoughts so well~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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6 posted 2004-11-15 07:17 PM

Steve, the good side of the coin is that
hearts do mend...just slowly sometimes.

Cloud 9
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7 posted 2004-11-15 07:36 PM

Just exactly how I am feeling today. Love the poem.

BluesSerenade
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8 posted 2004-11-15 11:04 PM

The cold hard truth is something to contend with, indeed.
Then again, real friends are so far and few between.

Enjoyed your poem, steve~

stevebrklynnyc
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9 posted 2004-11-16 06:47 AM

Thank you all for reading, Steve.

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