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Hub And Deluge |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Mighty efforts convene in mask As my feelings wear my clothes Thus bred to love from birth Lacy delicates of experience Swathed in chance The sky gathers Finding fault in vapors far beyond me Condensing wonder with reality Until the bleed of liquid walls Though I watch the falls with open eyes Beading on my skin the essence of weep An angel’s tears Let loose of sadness far and wide Observed it is the storm within this me A just disperse of seasons blew Of emerald bath awaits the see Finality is but a new beginning This fall bursts unrelenting There giggles in the small The concept of the great Although a dream is fed by many The drink is given one for all It is then the rain finds reason to await Copyright Kkh 10/23/04 |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Whewww, awesomely deep words K. Your muse has done well. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Mighty efforts convene in mask As my feelings wear my clothes *************** I believe many of us do this in our day to day lives. Almost like a masquerade ball that never ends. *************** Finding fault in vapors far beyond me Condensing wonder with reality Until the bleed of liquid walls Though I watch the falls with open eyes Beading on my skin the essence of weep **************** Where the overwhelm tries to consume from too much dwell? ***************** Let loose of sadness far and wide Observed it is the storm within this me A just disperse of seasons blew Of emerald bath awaits the see Finality is but a new beginning ***************** Release ...... even if momentary **************** It is then the rain finds reason to await *************** Another invite to the daily masquerade and the walls of protection through imprisoned escaped. Will probably have to come back and read again or two to see if I am reading backwards or upside down but this is the initial impact. As I always find in your words, much to comtemplate and many emotional questions dwelling. The answers seem to lie in the second chance of trust. Hard for anyone to get there these days. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Thank you Magnus for your unending support. Your influence has been a priceless gift. Mark, Your kind insight makes me look again at the outcome of my write. There is nothing more healthy than feeling what you feel. The second chance of trust is exactly right... We each deserve this and I intend to achieve it, and blow the same wish upon the wind. Thank you. TD |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
It sounds like that bath was enjoyable Dave |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
the sky gathers wonderful words your words take off and fly, above any doubts, your faith and poetic vision surpass all |
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