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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2004-04-25 07:05 AM


Touching

I’ve touched in life a soul or two
An open door there are so few
A warmth of heart that has domain
Whose essence is a seeds germane

A spirit that is host in trust
That treasures every piece of dust
That rises with the wind in flare
And prizes every sense that’s there

A feel that is no feel at all
A voice that speaks without a call
Eyes that look beyond desist
And drinks the dew drops of the mist

I’ve touched in life a soul or two
An open door there are so few
A warmth of heart that has domain
Whose essence is a seeds germane

They are the colored rainbows bend
They are the treasures at the end



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Margherita
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1 posted 2004-04-25 07:15 AM


Dear Seymour, this is awesome. And it goes into my library .... and you have touched many more souls than two, believe me!
Thank you for this Sunday gift!
Love and light. Margherita

Sunshine
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2 posted 2004-04-25 07:24 AM


I’ve touched in life a soul or two
An open door there are so few
A warmth of heart that has domain
Whose essence is a seeds germane

A spirit that is host in trust
That treasures every piece of dust
That rises with the wind in flare
And prizes every sense that’s there

A feel that is no feel at all
A voice that speaks without a call
Eyes that look beyond desist
And drinks the dew drops of the mist

I’ve touched in life a soul or two
An open door there are so few
A warmth of heart that has domain
Whose essence is a seeds germane

They are the colored rainbows bend
They are the treasures at the end


No kidding!!!  
And it's been OUR good fortune!


ethome
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New Brunswick Canada
3 posted 2004-04-25 08:02 AM


Ah, a nice peaceful positive outlook Sy
A very enjoyable read from you this morning.
Many many fellow human paths we cross and it's so good to experience the good in it all.

Good morning to you and I'll pour you a cup of coffee. Would you like a hot muffin too?


Have a good day!


Eric

Ain't doin nothin at all
Just answerin the call
Kinda driftin away from it all~~~~~

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2004-04-25 08:52 AM


Morning Sy....this is especially beautiful.
Very much enjoyed the morning read.
~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~

To have lived the dream of a love so true...
   is to have seen a glimpse of heaven.

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
5 posted 2004-04-25 08:52 AM


Morning Sy....this is especially beautiful.
Very much enjoyed the morning read.
~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~

To have lived the dream of a love so true...
   is to have seen a glimpse of heaven.

garysgirl
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6 posted 2004-04-25 08:56 AM


I’ve touched in life a soul or two
An open door there are so few
A warmth of heart that has domain
Whose essence is a seeds germane

They are the colored rainbows bend
They are the treasures at the end


Oh yes, you have touched so many with your beautiful and wise poetry, my friend. This one is going into my Seymour file.
   and  



scorpio
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right...there
7 posted 2004-04-25 09:03 AM


Sy, you've touched many people with your wise words.  You are indeed a rainbow's treasure.

believe in what your heart feels...

Earth Angel
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8 posted 2004-04-25 10:10 AM


A "touching" write.

"Eyes that look beyond desist
And drinks the dew drops of the mist"

~ Yes, indeed!

Sip slowly, drink deep!
EA

passing shadows
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9 posted 2004-04-25 01:54 PM


yes, you have
Janet Marie
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10 posted 2004-04-25 02:11 PM


A spirit that is host in trust
That treasures every piece of dust
That rises with the wind in flare
And prizes every sense that’s there

A feel that is no feel at all
A voice that speaks without a call
Eyes that look beyond desist
And drinks the dew drops of the mist

=====================================


and its in your "touchless touch" that we learn so much.

I always knew Randy was a touchy feely kinda dragon. *lol*

*ww*

iliana
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since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
11 posted 2004-04-25 02:38 PM


You have touched more than a few souls here, Sey.  Beautiful poem.  

[This message has been edited by iliana (04-25-2004 11:44 PM).]

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
12 posted 2004-04-25 03:00 PM


Margherita
Did you know you are on my list.

Sunshine
And so are you.

ethome
You didn't think I'd leave you off?

Nancy,
And you have been there a long time.

garysgirl
You know you are on the list.

scorpio
Without a doubt.

Earth Angel
Counting an Angel on my list was beyond my imagination.

passing  
I would never pass by you.

As for my Tinkerbell,
I sent my personal representative Randy to let you know you are special.


iliana,
Did you think I forgot you.


Beki
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since 1999-09-15
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Newport Beach, CA, USA
13 posted 2004-04-25 07:51 PM


this is simply beautiful, very nice use of rhyme and meter -bravo!
Seymour Tabin
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Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
14 posted 2004-04-25 09:16 PM


Thank you Beki


suthern
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15 posted 2004-04-26 01:04 PM


I’ve touched in life a soul or two

Including mine. *S* And you continue to do so, every day. *S* Beautiful write!!

Seymour Tabin
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Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
16 posted 2004-04-26 03:01 PM


suthern
You are a love.

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