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Cold_Eternity
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0 posted 2004-04-26 01:22 AM



Tender evening’s supple breath,
Drawing wisps of life gently between the swaying pines,
Blowing white cotton upward, alongside a granite cliff,
Etched deeply with long forgotten ghostly streams;
The firmament, moody, like mercury pored over a rough slate,
The fading light of a dying day, sending golden lances downward;
The phantom reflections of laughter in the greyhound window,
A sentiment of unity and division mutually felt by the strangers;
A game of cards is played and wagers made;
A sullen man sips from a flask and stares unblinkingly at the window,
Seeing yet not comprehending the story it tells,
Searching out and seeing only the world outside;
He sips again and chuckles to himself as the bus drives on,
A private joke never to be shared except with the Cosmos,
A lone man sitting on a bus, staring ever out the window
Tracing a gliding road between the trees, following a valley,
Perched over a cliff, leading us eternally on…

~Across a thousand leagues and passed the impossible, lies our childlike innocence, and in that our peace.~

© Copyright 2004 Matthew Koenig - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
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displaced
1 posted 2004-04-26 02:35 AM


very descriptive imagery here
iliana
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since 2003-12-05
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2 posted 2004-04-26 03:38 AM


Enjoyed!  Welcome to PASSIONS!
ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
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3 posted 2004-04-26 03:11 PM


pretty scene.
TD

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