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vega
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since 2004-04-12
Posts 24
wherever I lay my hat.

0 posted 2004-04-20 01:21 PM


We've paved our way through centuries,
put men upon the moon.
Defied the laws of gravity,
found ancient hidden tombs.

We've plotted courses cross the sea,
found new unchartered lands.
A million cures for this and that,
replaced a severed hand.

We've cloned and bred, seen ethics fall,
achieved a million dreams.
Yet still can't put an end to war,
we don't know what that means.


© Copyright 2004 vega - All Rights Reserved
ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
1 posted 2004-04-20 01:59 PM


Sad but true...
Well done.
TD

JL
Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
2 posted 2004-04-20 02:03 PM


I agree, sad, and so true.
JL

Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
3 posted 2004-04-20 02:11 PM



Vega, a very insightful write.
One would think...wouldn't one?

vega
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since 2004-04-12
Posts 24
wherever I lay my hat.
4 posted 2004-04-20 02:52 PM


Thank you all for your kind comments.
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