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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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Field of Knowledge Remains tapping at my window Who would of ever thought after all this time? That sharp reef of illusion was snuffed out! But there it is, scattering memories like Clutching post-scripts tugging at my throat The ones which never really explain everything Held fast to a breathing apparatus I’ll defend all personal integrity Despite your gripping performance Ship wrecked at sea waiting for the rocks to crush Any bondage I was drowning in a monster of silence With no map out of that castle of horrors Dry humor never caught your eye That short leash mated with my sighs of hard knocks Which burst down the door of any winery Did I have way to much to drink? Or was it the dry spell afterwards? Termites ate away all our bridges Sure got they’re belly full…all structure was gone I waited for clearance, but detoured to a lower level Ones you might never return from or find your way home So I thought I’d exclusively create an Arch and Vault! Concrete girder’s with steel reinforced barb You know what they say If you build it, they will come! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"Termites ate away all our bridges Sure got they’re belly full…all structure was gone" What an exciting write. This line really got my attention. JL  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Extremely well done Lee. Much enjoyed. Hugs~ To have lived the dream of a love so true... |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
I especially liked the last stanza. It's good to read your work again. It seems like with Spring yardwork, I can't fit everything in! Sadelite |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Great write! Eric |
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