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MovesInSilence
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0 posted 2004-04-15 01:27 AM


As I sat down to write some poetry
Wa Wah wa wa
Cleared my mind to listen to my muse
Wa Wah wa wa
Grabbed up my writin' pen
Wa Wah wa wa
Scribbled a verse or two
Wa wah wa wa
Before i knew
Wa Wah wa wa
My Pen was outta ink !
I gots them outta ink blues



© Copyright 2004 Lina - All Rights Reserved
muted
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1 posted 2004-04-15 01:30 AM



Im glad you finally posted! Im so excited for you...and I love this (you know that).
Great job brave Lina...You have begun the journey.
(check your email for a special PIP greeting)


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passing shadows
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2 posted 2004-04-15 02:41 AM


happens to the best
Obscurity
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3 posted 2004-04-15 02:52 AM


Aha, the computer is the best way to never run out of ink.

Welcome to PIPTALK, I'm sure you'll enjoy your stay.

Sunshine
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4 posted 2004-04-15 05:52 AM


Cute entrance into Passions!  
Welcome, and please, enjoy!

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?  Keeping in mind, I must stand close...

Bonnie j
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5 posted 2004-04-15 06:00 AM


Hello Bon-Bon here.
Welcome to Passions. This is so cute. I always run out of ink.
Thanks for stopping in hope you have a lot of fun in your new venture called poetry.
Hugs Bon-Bon

Kethry
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6 posted 2004-04-15 06:49 AM


My pen never runs out of ink but before I sit down to write, I grab a coffee, feed the dog, change the baby, make a meal or two, wash the dishes... I liked the bluesy feel of this. Welcome to passions.

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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7 posted 2004-04-15 11:04 AM


Melanie~
Just ADORABLY done~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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8 posted 2004-04-15 11:12 AM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!
I very much enjoyed your first post!
Looking forward to more of your work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

To have lived the dream of a love so true...
   is to have seen a glimpse of heaven.

Martie
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9 posted 2004-04-15 11:16 AM


I enjoyed the humor in this.  Welcome to Passions!
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10 posted 2004-04-15 11:52 AM





Enjoyed your first post!!

Grover
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11 posted 2004-04-16 03:19 PM


Off with a real beat! Welcome to PIP!
muted
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12 posted 2004-04-18 09:53 AM


accidental tourist..sorry lina
next time, check the username..LOL

MovesInSilence
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13 posted 2004-04-18 09:59 AM


oops my bad ...
Ok what i wanted to say before being hijacked by a stray username was ...

Thank you everyone for replying to my first post. Hopefully first of many.

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14 posted 2004-04-18 10:04 AM



To Passions In Poetry.
I hope that you enjoy it here
amongst our Family Of Friends.
Just join right in and make yourself
at home!! We always enjoy new additions.
Hugs,
Ethel

Dark Angel
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15 posted 2004-04-20 07:54 AM


Welcome Lina, I enjoyed your first post and yes hopefully it is first of many.

Have you any dreams you'd like to sell?

Stevie Nicks

JL
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16 posted 2004-04-20 02:07 PM


HaaHaa!  This is just too funny!  Great write.
JL

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