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LeeJ
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0 posted 2004-02-20 08:06 AM


Come hither touching silence
Perception intuitively connects
Night determines mornings
Right after yesterday’s tests
Stumbling over certainty
Walking smack dab into distance
Eating concrete might be costly
Sometimes terrified me to bereavement

Yet…

Chaotic surges of great meteors
Clashing and clanging in far off air
Builds a great sea of existence
Where all misfortunes might snare

Never to forget stinging blood
Nor the stumbles of my mere youth
Where I dare take steps from my failures
Knowing sweet lilacs of conquest

In a place where lives scuttle together
Those repercussions of counting deceit
Life’s stillness depends on a balance
Of a multiple resourceful sleeve

I gulp daffodil juice for breakfast
By accident step on my own toes
Yet those that smile, don’t seem to mind
As goodness echoes the undertones

Occasions of beauty thrives in our yards
Where our cores favorably dance with glee
If you happen to chose a different boulevard
Then enhance your seasons….by all means

Happy Friday!


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1 posted 2004-02-20 09:06 AM


Walking smack dab into distance
Eating concrete might be costly
Sometimes terrified me to bereavement


like these lines...

nicely done ma'am

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