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scorpio
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0 posted 2004-02-19 08:00 AM



Icicle

Freed by warm sun
Drops drip down from frozen grip
Replenishing earth.

believe in what your heart feels...

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Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2004-02-19 08:01 AM


Perfect!  This is not only beautiful, but also perfect!
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2 posted 2004-02-19 08:18 AM


scorpio
Good one, enjoyed.

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3 posted 2004-02-19 08:46 AM


always a good sign when they start to melt....lovely images here

~~**~~
There are moments when speech
is but a mouth pressed lightly and
humbly against the angel's hands.

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4 posted 2004-02-19 09:21 AM


It was a melting day yesterday...
today bodes the same.


Winter disappears
Gentle fingers of rays seeking
Last blankets of white

scorpio
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5 posted 2004-02-19 09:47 AM


Thank you Donna.  Your generous comments mean a great deal.

Glad you liked this Sy.  Thank you very much.

I'm with you Lauren.  Let it melt and bring on spring. Thank you.

I'll be happy to see that white blanket turn green Karilea.  Thank you for your support.

believe in what your heart feels...

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6 posted 2004-02-19 10:25 AM


Scorpio~
Imagery complete~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Margherita
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7 posted 2004-02-19 12:29 PM


A beautiful image, perfectly interpreted!
Love, Margherita

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8 posted 2004-02-19 01:01 PM


Scorpio, your love of the outdoors and nature
shine through..here in this perfect Haiku.
It has been a dreadfully cold and long winter here also.
But today..one can almost catch the scent of Spring in the air.
I so enjoyed this post today!  You are spoiling us this week!
~Hugs & Smiles, Tinker~

  ~ Whatever our souls are made of,
      his and mine are the same. ~      
            

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9 posted 2004-02-19 01:06 PM


Excellent! Grover.
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10 posted 2004-02-19 01:42 PM


Perfect !   Love it !
hugs, Chris

"At one glance
I love you
With a thousand hearts."


— Mihri Hatun, Turkish poet



    

choshi
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11 posted 2004-02-19 03:44 PM


Freed by warm sun
Drops drip down from frozen grip
Replenishing earth.


Beautiful! ~P


scorpio
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12 posted 2004-02-19 04:33 PM


Thank you Marge.  I value your comments.

Tinker, you're right about this being a long cold winter.  It's time for spring.  Let's go for a walk and look for signs of spring.

Grover thank you for your kind words.

Thank you Chris.  I'm pleased you liked this.

Choshi thank you for your support.

believe in what your heart feels...

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13 posted 2004-02-19 10:25 PM




(big angel hugs) Awwwwwwww, this is beautiful, sweet friend, your beautiful words bring even more rejuvenation to the earth, yay, God Bless You, spring is coming, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Scorpio, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

scorpio
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14 posted 2004-02-19 10:33 PM


Yes Noah, it's time to look of spring.  I'm anxious.  Thank you my friend.

believe in what your heart feels...

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15 posted 2004-02-20 08:42 AM


I'm always anxious for spring.. hope it comes soon to you and your part of the world my friend.

enjoyed the poem..

scorpio
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16 posted 2004-02-20 09:10 AM


Thank you Ron.  This has been a long cold winter. Time for a respite of spring.

believe in what your heart feels...

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