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Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

0 posted 2004-02-18 07:19 PM

“LIPS OF COLDNESS”
~~~~
Once I thought a broken heart
could never mend, but then
you came and taught me
of loves precious
moments…

And when you touched my
lips of coldness with the
warmth of your kiss
they melted away
into yours…
~~~~
Bill Charles

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2004-02-18 07:24 PM

Bill
That's the way to do it. Good one.

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

2 posted 2004-02-18 09:19 PM

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2004-02-19 12:31 PM

Yes, it feels so good to know that broken hearts can mend. Uplifting and sweet.
Love, Margherita

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

4 posted 2004-02-19 12:32 PM

ahem...Bill? Where you been?

I missed your romantic musings.

Bonnie j
Senior Member

since 2003-06-27

Posts 1588
Ohio

5 posted 2004-02-19 12:34 PM

So romantic. What a wonderful feeling when a broken heart is mended and the warmth of the sun comes shining through.
Bon-Bon

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

6 posted 2004-02-19 12:36 PM

Beautiful, Bill. I've missed you
and your romantic poems around here.

Hugs

Ethel

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2004-02-19 12:44 PM

  ~ Whatever our souls are made of,
      his and mine are the same. ~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2004-02-19 01:14 PM

sweet!

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

9 posted 2004-02-19 04:52 PM

bill
i cant believe your lips could ever be cold
however, this is warmth on a cold nj morning

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

10 posted 2004-02-19 05:01 PM

Great write, very poetic indeed! Grover.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

11 posted 2004-02-19 06:56 PM

(smiles) Yay! Oh Bill, this is soooooo gorgeous and uplifting, sweet friend, this is such a happy love poem, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

12 posted 2004-02-19 06:59 PM

nice write

Ravenwolfvoyager
Member

since 2003-12-25

Posts 326

13 posted 2004-02-19 07:03 PM

Outstanding Bill. Well done sir!!

Paul Wilson

Member Elite

since 2002-07-07

Posts 4711
United States

14 posted 2004-02-20 08:55 AM

Bill...Glad to see you are doing okay.
Enjoyed the poem...Paul

"To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you"

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

15 posted 2004-02-20 08:58 AM

nicely done Bill.. and good to read you again

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