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'65 Black Mustang (Recently revised version)
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'65 Black Mustang (Recently revised version) |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Insomnolence rides the galing wind as I reached for comfort in Mustang black. Despite the destination, I believed unharmed you would bring me back. As I chaffeured h.s. friends,we joked calling you the "Passion Pit" Knowing good and well that That name would never fit! Should I write more about our acquaintance, tell you how you made me feel? You were my first to free, To empower me beyond your wheel. Tonight, as warmed crystals huddle against snowy glass, I think back to Mustang times wrecked in that icy crash. Whiplashed, I closed your door. You were a good friend to me little old mustang. You shared with me the world to see. [This message has been edited by Sadelite (01-28-2004 11:28 AM).] |
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McLean Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 484state of marital bliss |
Sadelite~ This is a keeper, and a "share-er"...My husband is restoring his "love", a '69 convertable Firebird. I enjoy seeing his passion in this pasttime. Thank you for your kind response to one of my recent posts...today is a stay-in-out-of-the-ice day, and I will be doing much reading. I've your Prose forum selection on my "to do" list. Thank you much for pointing me in that direction, as I spend little time in other forums, mainly the open one and spiritual one.  McLean |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
we had a '64 Mustang...but white ~~those were the days~ *s M |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
peaches and cream 84 Monte Carlo,,,,from when they still had curves to enjoy,,, feeling it Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"Should I write more about our acquaintance, tell you how you made me feel? You were my first to free, To empower me beyond your wheel." My favorite above. Very, very good, Sadie. |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
iliana, favorite and true... Glad you found this one. ~Sadie~ |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big angel hugs) I wish I grew up back then when they had all the cool cars, sweet friend, heck, I'm going to go vintage, hehehe! (giggles) This is a most beautiful tribute, sweet friend, I understand how a car can be of sentimental value, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sadelite, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Noah, Yes, a car and more... Thank you, Noah, for your reply. You always add a bit of joy to my day, as do you to many others. Take care. ~Sadelite |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Hey Sadelite. I remember reading the first version of this. Can't say for sure what change you made but I still like it. Of course I love old cars and old bikes. If I could walk out and buy my dream it would be a 1950 Indian Chief Model C-41 motorcycle. Of course that is just a dream. Love the poem my friend. Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Ev, a 1950 Indian Chief Motorcycle...it sounds neat! I've only been on a motor cycle once, but I will say it had a great feel to it! Glad this brought a good memory... happy writing to you, e.v., ~sadelite~ |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
MCLean, nakdthoughts, and Michelle, Thank you for your comments and those dream cars... Have a good day! ~SAdeltie |
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