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HopeS
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0 posted 2004-02-03 05:40 AM



Never Once Did I Pretend

Through your times of silence
I do know that life goes on
In my heart you will always be
That special someone

It is the pain of never knowing
Its the most frustrating part
Silence causing those aches
Felt deeply in my heart

While weeping my silent tears
Behind my smiling disguise
Aching remains on the inside
As my lonely heart cries

With the forever we promised
Attachments to never depart
Etchings are there permanent
Engrained inside my heart

Yes I was clinging to the hope
My longings refusing to end
For I gave with heart sincerity
Never once did I pretend

HopeĀ©2004



© Copyright 2004 HopeS - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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1 posted 2004-02-03 07:46 AM


I shed a tear with you, dear Hope, so heartfelt are your beautiful words.
Love is joy, love is pain, of this I am aware.
Love and hugs. Margherita

HopeS
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2 posted 2004-02-03 07:51 AM


Thank you Margherita for your caring kind comment and for your heartfelt understanding
Hope

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3 posted 2004-02-03 01:00 PM


sending hearthugs
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4 posted 2004-02-03 01:10 PM


What a deep expression of your pain -- hang in there.  
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5 posted 2004-02-03 01:14 PM


Hope, this is so heart-felt.
I truly hope that things get better.
Hugs  
Ethel

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6 posted 2004-02-03 06:09 PM


...ths is very deeply felt..i know where you are coming from!

absolutely beautiful

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7 posted 2004-02-03 06:13 PM




Aww Hope, this is so touching

I wish you all the best





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8 posted 2004-02-03 11:26 PM




(big angel hugs) Oh Hope, I send many angel healing hugs your way, sweet friend, I understand how this feels and no one should ever be denied who gives with all heart! (sigh) You deserve all the joy you dream of, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Hope, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

HopeS
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9 posted 2004-02-04 01:03 AM


Thank you all for your caring replies and many hugs .... they keep me afloat and prevent me from sinking

Hope

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