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Teen Poetry #7

Can it ever be ?

sweet_cute_palestinian04
Member

since 2004-04-11

Posts 418
Earth

0 posted 2004-04-13 02:41 PM

THIs a poem i wrote when i was going throguh depressions with my love.. i hope you would like it....:-]

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would it ever be tears without pain?
would it ever be a heart without blood?

would it ever be a body without a shape?
would it ever be a bird without wings?

would it ever be eye without color?
would it ever be food without taste?

would it ever be an ocean without water?
would it ever be a jungle without trees?

would it ever befingers without nails?
would it ever be a face without skin??

CAN IT EVER BE LOVE WITHOUT PAIN?
WHEN YOUR INLOVE YOUR IN PAIN,AND WHEN YOUR NEVER INLOVE ITS ALWAYZ PAIN.

CAN THERE EVER BE A SOLUTION FOR SOMETHING WE LOVE?..OR CAN WE JUST IGNORE LIFE AND LIVE AS IF WE LOVE IT..

::^LOVE^::

UnsilencedWords666
Member

since 2003-11-19

Posts 63
Broken Memories & Falling Tears

1 posted 2004-04-13 06:35 PM

I don't know what it is about this...but I really do like it...Nice work!

*~*nessa bear*~*

You can’t choose who you are Only what you will be Why can't you choose To let me be me...*~*Nessa Bear*~*

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

2 posted 2004-04-13 06:40 PM

I understood it.
I never really see poems like this on the forums, and I enjoyed reading it. nice work.

~Alli~

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