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WindSong
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since 2002-12-23
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Long Island, New York

0 posted 2004-04-13 04:32 PM



"...love..."

some have it
some hate it
some need it
others don't

some abuse it
some use it
some are obsessed with it
others aren't

some see it
some are blinded by it
some don't care for it
others do

It's a four letter word that many
know, but don't understand.
It's a word that comes and goes...

...LOVE...

brings smiles, tears, laughter,
madness, hatred, kindness,
respect and affection..

"They say that truth will set you free, but then so will a lie. It all depends if you're trying to get to the promised land or just trying to get by."

© Copyright 2004 Kirah - All Rights Reserved
WinterWren
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since 2002-12-01
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...Coming to
1 posted 2004-04-13 05:45 PM


Hey, nice to see you posting here again.
I really like this one, wow. I think love has always been something that's hard to describe, and everyone has a different way of doing so, but you hit it just right.
Excellent job.

W.W.
We were meant to live for so much more have we lost ourselves?
Maybe redemption has stories to tell maybe forgiveness is right where you fell.

UnsilencedWords666
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since 2003-11-19
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Broken Memories & Falling Tears
2 posted 2004-04-13 06:19 PM


I loved this poem...amazing write...

*~*nessa bear*~*

You can’t choose who you are Only what you will be Why can't you choose To let me be me...*~*Nessa Bear*~*

*Alli4000*
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3 posted 2004-04-13 06:43 PM


You summed up what love is very nicely.

~Alli~

WindSong
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since 2002-12-23
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4 posted 2004-04-13 08:33 PM


Why thank you! I wrote it a while ago...but never had time or couldn't post it here. but yeah, so anyways im hoping to be posting more! thanks for you awesome reviews...a real confidence booster!

WW It's good to BE back!

"They say that truth will set you free, but then so will a lie. It all depends if you're trying to get to the promised land or just trying to get by."

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