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Teen Poetry #7

what can i do?

sweet_cute_palestinian04
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since 2004-04-11

Posts 418
Earth

0 posted 2004-04-11 11:50 PM

what can i do to be loved??
am i not good enough for anyone?

do i have to turn myself into a man for them to love me??

would killing myself help?
wouldgetting mental help?

do i love too much or too lesss?/
do i love alot so they take adventage of me??

can i say i love to people who dont even care???
can i love with people who have NO respect for me???

do i have to dream but never comes to be real??
can i hope to be free??

GUESS NOTHNG OF THESE WILL HELP BUT TO FORGET I HAVE A LIFE..TO GIVE MYSELF TO MY FAMILY AND FRIENDS SO THEY COULD CONTROL ME ALLL IN ONE

*Alli4000*

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since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

1 posted 2004-04-12 06:55 PM

I like this poem because you really showed your true feelings.

Welcome to Passions and thanks for the nice comment that you wrote on my poem!

~Alli~

Sweetpoet16m4u04
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since 2002-11-10

Posts 153
Ma, U.S.A

2 posted 2004-04-12 07:26 PM

Hey there Sweet,
First of thanks for your lovely comment to my First Time poem. Im glad you enjoyed it and feel free to read some of my others you might enjoy them!! As far as you poem goes its wonderful besides the fact that how sad it is lol. You dont have to change anything about you ok its just that no guy or whoever else out there just hasnt recognized how special of a girl you are deep down inside. If you ever need a friend to come and talk to to wipe away any possible tears you can instant message me on aol instant messenger my screen name is chrissccr18.

Keep up the good Work,
Hugs, Chris

sweet_cute_palestinian04
Member

since 2004-04-11

Posts 418
Earth

3 posted 2004-04-13 04:40 AM

thank you all soo much ,you made me feel soo special..thanks and may god bless you all ,you know its hard living in a age full of depressions and not understanding life with people who dont care,all they care about is just having me for my beauties like most guys ...thanks again ..

P.S
WITH ALL MY RESPECT AND HONESTY I THANK YOU

::^love^::

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