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sweet_cute_palestinian04
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0 posted 2004-04-11 05:47 PM



Love bade me welcome,yet my soul drew back,
guilty of dust and sin.

But quick eyed-love,observing grew me grow slack
from my firstentrance in,

but nearer to me,sweetly questioning
if i lacked anything

A guest ,i answered ,worthy to be here
LOve said,yoy shall be he.

I,the unkind ,ungrateful?.ah my dear
I CANNONT look on thee.

Love took my hand and smilling reply,
who made the eyes but I?

Truth ,lord but i have marred them,let my shame \
go where it doth deserve

and knowyou noy ,say loves ,who bore the blame?
MY dear ,then taste my meat

SO DID I SIT AND EAT..

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I hope you like it.. peace with all my love and respect

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sweet_cute_palestinian04
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1 posted 2004-04-12 06:23 PM


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In Your Poetic Mind
2 posted 2004-04-12 11:39 PM


hey and welcome home....good to see you are posting again..

~~**~~
The sound of silence calls,
I hear your voice and suddenly
I'm falling, lost in a dream
The echo of our souls meet
~~**~~

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