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vampiana Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 296Nothing and Nowhere |
I see right through the smiles You gently flash my way I can see that you're pretending Just trying to look great. But who do you think you're kidding? When you're so broken inside. Everyone knows your secret But you still try to keep it It ain't gonna hide When you're slowly Dying Inside. Reduced to a nothing Have you given in yet? Where do you find the willpower? To maintain the denial. You're not hurting anyone Except for yourself And you're trying to laugh again now But it's bitten back by tears. "I cannot stand the way you tease, I love you though you hurt me so"-Marilyn Manson |
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News_From_Nowhere Member
since 2002-06-14
Posts 173CU, NY |
"Where do you find the willpower? To maintain the denial." Great wording! And the "bitten back by tears" was most exceptional! Rider "So give life to your dreams, for there lies your survival, and cast your heart beyond those faded scenes, and I'll bring you through the storm" |
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darkness_witch Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516Underneath |
awesome one of my faves of yours! loved every bit of it perfect love and empathy sophie nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world. |
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silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand |
WOAH omg... kirsty i am blown away AH! that was soooo flucking amazing. ah. ah! i love that so much! YERRR! LOR you're the only one keeping me alive |
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aussie teen Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 396Australia |
how the hell can you get into my head so easily vamp?????? this is me right here right now!!! this is mildly freaky..... this is a beautiful poem and has saaid so many things to me all at once.... thanku for this vamp Ruth live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever...... |
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PainBaneChaos Member
since 2003-10-17
Posts 150The point of no return |
Exactly it, and I know just about every one of us can relate to this at one time or another. Awesome. "World's use is cold, world's love is vain, world's cruelty is bitter bane; but is not the fruit of pain." Elizabeth Barrett Browning |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
Omg, beautifully crafted words. Yes, this was a verrrry good one from you again, Kurst. Hollow. Courtney. I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World. |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Maybe a reason you're depressed is to write poetry like this. I mean later you might find yourself learning from it and others might learn from it too. And besides that how can you have beauty if you don't have the ugly? Beauty being happy and ugly being hurt. -GIS Doing the same thing a million times in a row will definitely affect your head. Read and pratice and read and pratice and read and prati........ead a |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
damn chick. Another good one. I love it. I can relate soo well...that person in the poem reminds me of me...cuz for a long time i hid my feelings. I still do a lot. It is just easier that way....mmmkay. well i just wanted to say i love ur poem...and im adding. Kissa I ask why, but in my mind, |
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