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Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

0 posted 2003-12-12 04:54 PM

Always Knowing … Caring Loving
~*Marge Tindal*~

~Always
The two of us
Committed in our hearts
To the devotion of our love
Surely sent to us from Heaven above
Foreverly and one more day
Taking not for granted
This keep of love
Always~

~Knowing
Together that
We are always to be
Never one without the other
Just as God has intended us to be
Stronger having one another
For this day and beyond
In His blessings
Knowing~

~Caring
More for the we
Of you and me combined
Than any other love we’ve known
Holding on to one another knowing
This love is meant to be always
When sent from the Father
All things come right
Caring~

~Loving
With all we have
To share with each other
The all of you completes me so
In the all of me, you find completion
Together we become as one
Always knowing, caring
Always, always
Loving~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
noles1@totcon.com

SmartChick
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since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

1 posted 2003-12-12 05:31 PM

Beautiful Marge! Just beautiful!

Martie

Moderator

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

2 posted 2003-12-12 06:10 PM

Marge/sis...Sounds like a perfect kind of love.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2003-12-12 06:15 PM

Beautifully penned Marge.
Hugs~

~ Let peace begin with me...

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

4 posted 2003-12-12 06:48 PM

wow ,what a love song

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

5 posted 2003-12-12 07:33 PM

Just lovely Marge. Hugs to you, Chris

"At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet."
-Plato

Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

6 posted 2003-12-12 07:34 PM

Yes, this is how it should be, but not always is alas.

Love you Margi girl, beautiful write.

Titia

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

7 posted 2003-12-12 08:00 PM

As pretty to the eye, as to the heart here Marge. TD

James_A_Fraser
Senior Member

since 2003-09-03

Posts 972
Out Making Anticlines

8 posted 2003-12-12 09:01 PM

It's perfection indeed when you find this...your perfect lover, perfect love. I hope you hold on to yours forever -- I mean to hold mine even longer.

~~J

Jes
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since 2003-10-21

Posts 422
Denmark

9 posted 2003-12-12 09:23 PM

Smile

I enjoyed the read, and wondered how you can get the words to fit like that the same time you make the words.

Jes

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

10 posted 2003-12-13 05:48 AM

I got here late...but better late than never...

what can I say that hasn't already been said?

Love this!

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

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Between the Lines

11 posted 2003-12-13 07:40 AM

M

Aimster
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since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

12 posted 2003-12-14 04:50 PM

marge,

as always splendid! beautiful beautiful
beautiful

Happy Holidays,
Amy

"love is like a butterfly--
if you chase it,
it will surely fly away,instead
hold it close and watch it grow into
something beautiful"
~me~

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

13 posted 2003-12-14 05:30 PM

Thank you all, dear friends~
This is my heart, all wrapped up in mutual word-promises to last a lifetime~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
noles1@totcon.com

[This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (12-14-2003 05:31 PM).]

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

14 posted 2003-12-14 07:57 PM

Beautiful...James

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

15 posted 2003-12-15 12:48 PM

This is absolutely lovely, my friend... *S*

LngJhnAg
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since 1999-07-23

Posts 3508
Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion

16 posted 2003-12-15 12:51 PM

Marge - Perfectly structured in a 2-4-6-8-10-8-6-4-2. The words flow so effortlessly, too. Nicely done. The way you presented the poem, with the centered lines makes it a work of art to see, too.

NewEnglandlazurlu
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since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

17 posted 2003-12-15 07:55 PM

Marge, you've outdone yourself with this beautiful love poem.
It's a very special gem.

Love ya, Marti

'You cannot shake hands with a clenched fist.'
PEACE!!!
Indira Gandhi

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