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Goodknight
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0 posted 2003-12-15 05:03 PM


Sun rays radiant and bright
Ponderous thoughts penetrate the night
Lively sighs call forth special hues
Somber clouds hang over and spew
Difficult passages curl in minds and ignite
Feelings of lust and love
Call over the mountains and thrill in the hills
No one seems to see and an ear lost the hear
So what is the meaning
Of sights and sounds all around
Words written to empty but
Their sounds surround and say
Things never said but felt and deeply thought
Ideas compounded and images confounded
Life opens up but not for others you see
They read just a little but time wrestles them away
So say what you will and hope words may be a thrill
But they may not find time to fill your mind’s bill
So write and expel things you need to say
Wrestle those thoughts and fondle those feelings
Say how they mingle – say what you feel
Offer them only to your mind and be healed


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skyshine
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Beneath the northern stars
1 posted 2003-12-15 05:14 PM


I liked.

~sky

Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone...
~Jewel

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
2 posted 2003-12-15 05:29 PM


Good Advice..*s

M

Enchantress
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3 posted 2003-12-15 06:08 PM


So very true Paul...well said m'friend.
Hugs~

~Let peace begin with me...    

Martie
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4 posted 2003-12-15 08:09 PM


Paul...

"So write and expel things you need to say
Wrestle those thoughts and fondle those feelings
Say how they mingle – say what you feel
Offer them only to your mind and be healed"

I am museless at the moment...so I am full of frustration at not being able to write what I feel.  Hopefully it won't last too long.  So glad to see you posting again though!   

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