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Still the Eyes |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind 
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In the snows of winter {sometimes} I find there is a faint trace of music watercolors seep across the landscape in frag ments of piano sonatas {sometimes} in darkness I watch moonlight rise to the sky wondering how I escaped past years & casual folds of memories I linger in stolen sleep lost {lost at your lips} your tender words make me weep I adore silence even now I think of how your touch would feel & {often write letters to you; delicate -- tender reeds in nights of late hours} each time asking: "gentle wind" carry this thought upon your river I breathe in, love falls upon my mouth, I taste the sound of water let me sleep, let me dream, be inside with you let me remember your fingers and words where still, the eyes of a lover's soul accompany my nights There's a song inside my soul One that I've tried to write over and over again [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (10-10-2003 08:50 AM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"I breathe in, love falls upon my mouth, I taste the sound of water let me sleep, let me dream, be inside with you let me remember your fingers and words where still, the eyes of a lover's soul accompany my nights" =========================================== You are one very talented lady! This is absolutely breathtaking. Hope your birthday has been a very special one sweetie! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
your poetry defines and encompasses all that is exquisitely ethereal. Few hold the gift to lay down words with such a signature unique artistry. Your muse is rare and precious.  "Nature's first green is gold, |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Damn.... al that JM said..and then some.... Your words move me... take me places I had forgotten, and places I didn't know were there.. pardon me, while I go read again the words..and revel in the form...immerse myself in the feelings you convey... Damn...anything else I'll say is just going to make me look like the melted fool I am right now.. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Ron? melted fool looks good on ya  lolme thinks Lauren's poetry could melt stone. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Lady L~ You know I know this my precious friend, but only YOU can whisper the words the way that you do. God I miss you  sister....  It's better than I could have planned.. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Ethereal magic...beautifully written. Hats off to you! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LadyOfTheGreenOrbs~ This is BEAUTIFUL !!!! And THIS ??? 'casual folds of memories' ... a treasure~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Greeneyes You have dewed me and hung me out to dry. Beautiful write.  |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
even now I think of how your touch would feel & {often write letters to you; delicate -- tender reeds in nights of late hours So pretty the "reeds" you write.. you are truly elegant in your passion Lauren, and I so love to read you. |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Lauren, your words melt the heart and soul of many.Only you can write with the tender passion, the spirited essence, the beautiful heart, and the tantalizing heat that you do.  Crystal |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Once again, I find myself floating in another realm when reading your poetry, Lauren. And this write is another beauty. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
 My, here it is your birthday and you gift us with this beautiful gem, why thank you, and Happy Birthday Lauren! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
A precious and appropriate ending to a most definitely beautiful piece of your soul, given to us, that we might feel what you have written. Thanx Lauren.. Loved this ending: where still, the eyes of a lover's soul accompany my nights |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Lauren, this is beautiful, sweet friend, this made me smile as all your gorgeous words too and make that twinkle in your eye always shine with joy! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lauren, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
you paint beautifully with words |
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