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KoKo
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Inside the shadow's shadow

0 posted 2003-09-21 10:02 PM


I often,
Without a notion of why,
Stumble into the echoes
Of the secret, hollow hills
Nestled deep inside pallor
Of sparkling stars of death.

It's a twist of unbidden
Pleasure
Soft and silent
Measure
Twixt and tween wary
Goose flesh.

The melody of breaths
Of song
Hypnotize any swept in visitor
"Fill us...your soul is the quench
For nothing
But empty hunger...

Follow the hollow hills..."

It is nothing but
Eerie air
That isn't there
And spider webs
Of drifting souls

Within the hollows
Of the gastly hills.

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

© Copyright 2003 Lauren - All Rights Reserved
QjQ
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1 posted 2003-09-21 10:17 PM


enjoyed the write n read,,,

                                    

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2 posted 2003-09-21 10:17 PM




(big hugggsssssss) And the stories of the hollow hills are always the ones I sympathize with the most, sweet friend, I try not to get overwhlemed with the sorrow of those stories but all the same too mnany less fortunate and lepers always come up and my heart goes out to them all! (sigh) This is a very heartfelt write, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lauren, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

JilGirl
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since 2003-05-24
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3 posted 2003-09-26 12:28 PM


Great expression of hollow hills! Which we've all experienced, at times. Writes, such as this brings awareness and thanksgiving for our non-hollow hills times!

'Tiz feathers that make the bird -
Always remember to keep them fluffed
but, never, EVER ruffle them!

angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19
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4 posted 2003-09-26 01:36 AM


This was a good write.It said so much.
Crystal

KoKo
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Inside the shadow's shadow
5 posted 2003-09-26 02:10 AM


Thanks, all

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

Earth Angel
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6 posted 2003-09-26 03:31 AM


Your "hollow hills" gave me "goose flesh"!

Wonderful and uniquely descriptive write, Dear KoKo!


EA

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