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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2003-09-25 06:00 PM

How strange
From mountain tops to tropics in a single flight
Stepping off the ledge, or resting on the edge
From poverty to philanthropic
Just a step
A leap into the waters white
Surfing to the shore, diving down for more
A lack of subsequence, the inner stillness totters
Only balance
In stranger landscapes seem the fields once my dream
Waking in the wee hours, cupping meadow showers
Thinking all is wrong, where traveled could belong
Keeping quiet
Lost somehow in cloudy days, bathing in eternal rays
Thoughts like voices dance, stepping up to take my chance
Change comes full and absent
I miss you

Copyright Kkh 9/25/03

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

1 posted 2003-09-25 06:03 PM

you have expressed this very well,,,

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

2 posted 2003-09-25 07:48 PM

Thoughts like voices dance, stepping up to take my chance
Change comes full and absent
I miss you

This one is library bound for sure! I am in awe of how you write. hugs, Chris

Let your life lightly dance on the edges of Time like dew on the tip of a leaf. -Tagore

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

3 posted 2003-09-26 02:04 AM

The way you write awes me.It touches the inner being.

Crystal

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2003-09-26 09:47 AM

Kathleen~
There's such a gentle to your thoughts~

'cupping meadow showers'

I adore this thought !!!
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
noles1@totcon.com

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

5 posted 2003-09-26 09:49 AM

Change comes full and absent
I miss you

bravo... an ending that befits the whole of the piece...

well done.. very well done

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

6 posted 2003-09-26 09:57 AM

ThisDiamond
Enjoyed the read.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

7 posted 2003-09-26 09:59 AM

Free verse!!!

HUGS

GypsyGirl
Junior Member

since 2003-09-21

Posts 29

8 posted 2003-09-26 10:06 AM

Nice write.

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

9 posted 2003-09-26 10:13 AM

change comes full and absent...what a closure. Bravo
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

10 posted 2003-09-26 12:21 PM

TD....this poem aches...and is so beautiful.

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